It seems so simple to get from Point A (Ed masturbating and fantasizing) to Point B (Roy walking in and, ahem, "taking over") but, in reality, it sucks getting all of that put in the right order.
Sounds veeeeery good to me :D But yeah, I know. The "bridges" between can be a real bitch. And right now I just can't seem to make myself sit down and concentrate on it. Doesn't help that I've always held the opinion that it has to flow right out of me, and that actual effort will end in shambles anyway.

What fandom is it in, if you don't mind my asking?
RPS, Carl Barât/Adam Green. I've actually got three bunnies now, but thinking about it is way more easy than writing it down *headdesk*